Good Drawings...
SOME of the drawings were good, but other than that it sucked. The animation was really bad, the music was depressing, there was a complete lack of plot etc. Good effort though.
Good Drawings...
SOME of the drawings were good, but other than that it sucked. The animation was really bad, the music was depressing, there was a complete lack of plot etc. Good effort though.
complete lack of plot?! what are you talking about? this is about my relationship... oh well, the plot must be more vivid to me.
One line summary
The blokes all look like they have tits.
errrrm o.....k
One line summary
'For whatever reason we were not chosen for the final cut' Maybe because they are poorly drawn and animated and don't follow the theme?
If you knew the theme maybe you would have thought twice before reviewing... or maybe not might be too hard for you. There was supposed to be a white back ground and someting florishing. We did that.
One line summary
Very nice sketches man, but a little colour and maybe a little more animation would go down a treat. And I'm sure everyone is saying this, but it's a little short...
Yeah, the next one will be longer. We finished this in one night. The B&W is a stylistic choice, make the blood stand out more, but certain things will be in color, and we've decided to do the final episode completely in color.
One line summary
Well, I was pretty impressed at that. At first I was thinking, fuck that, those blobs are basically one step up from stickmen. Then I realised it was actually very well drawn and animated. The only things I didn't like were the plotline, because I couldn't follow it, and the soundtrack, but then thats more of an opinion. I think with your drawing skills, you should more effort into drawing proper characters though. Good effort...
3/5
Thanks for the advice. Ill keep that in mind with this other cartoon i am working on. the characters look ok.
One line summary
That's was really nice, those graphics are very good. It desperately needs sound though. Hope you don't get bored making this, keep up the good work.
4/5
thanks
Bred from the reproductive cells of several species of wombat, and brought up by Keith Chegwin until the age of 12, when I was given a collection of Keith Chegwin themed cotton flannels and told that I had to fend for myself.
Age 38, Male
Scumbag
Kent Institute of Art & Design
Maidstone, England
Joined on 9/27/04